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Reviews for "World of Warcraft short"

Decent.

It's good for a first submission. Heres some stuff to improve on though.

Please read through all of this review.

First of all when they turn it looks like they are flat. Try not to do that. Draw different angles of them. This takes more time but comes out great.
Second of all add some sounds other than the music from that cartoon (I forget what it's called)
Third make a longer movie. I know this is meant to be a short but try make a longer movie next time.
Fourth it looked too tweened. Try to do FbF (Frame by frame) Which is putting each limb on a different layer and animating them one at a time without using tweens. Takes much longer but it makes movements look more realistic when used correctly.
Fifth I like your style of drawing.
Sixth keep making somewhat humorous cartoons. It seems to suit you.

I hope you improve on the next one. Try to follow some of the critisism I have said. It will make your movies so much better.

-XRaider.

Buttered-Noodle responds:

Thanks for your input! I will probably keep the way they turn though hehe ^_^

lol

I enjoyed it. it was good for a first flash. keep it up, spend more time, and maybe u could start sumthin...(WARLOCKS FTW!!!)

Buttered-Noodle responds:

Thanks! I will certainly make sure I spend a lot more time on my next project! Thanks for watching!

Hello, Buttered-Noodle.

I like the idea of making a World of Warcraft themed movie short. The graphics were fine but not the best. The movie was, to be absolutely honest, boring. I play World of Warcraft myself and did not see the feeling of it if you get what I am saying. But it was OK, just good though.

Movie: 2.5/10
Graphics: 4/10
Gore/Violence: 1/10
Length: 0.5/10
Age Rating: Definitely an E. Not a lot of violence, whatsoever. Good for anyonw who likes World of Warcraft, but it is not really good in length or movie. Total Explicit Content: 3/100

Total: 8/40. Not the best movie I have watched on Newgrounds but it was light and for kids who play WoW.

Thanks for reading my review and please take it onboard for future changes :)

- Conallpjmk

Buttered-Noodle responds:

Hey, thanks for the very thorough critcism. I made this 7 years ago and it was my first real animation! I am pretty proud of the outcome when you consider that context. But yes, it is very boring! Now that I look back on it, I have to remind myself that I was just trying to mesh a storybook kind of art with WoW and keep it light-hearted... but yes, very boring! I was just having some fun.

I really do appreciate you taking the time to make such a detailed explanation of your views and I think it's really cute how you have come up with stats and ranges for all sorts of peculiars. Thank you for your generosity with the rating as it seems very generous given your statistical outcomes. As you can see I do not log in very often, so to come back and find such responses is very entertaining and enjoyable for me. Thanks, sorry I am 2 years late to respond!

Heh its bad...

it wasnt good enough so just try the music from starcraft ep5 infestation in part 1 admiral's fall ok and make it more violent.

Buttered-Noodle responds:

Umm, ok...? I am not sure what that suggestion would do for me.