Wow. Nice First.
This was great for a first.
Only issue was the music stopping before it ever finished.
Graphics were quite good and the animation was better than just about everyone's first animation. So, well done. Especially for a rushed project.
I hope to see bigger, better things from you in the future.
4/5
Yes, well, first off thank you so much for your comments! I am glad that you enjoyed the animation!
The animation is supposed to run at 20fps, but, for some reason, it appears to be running at a stinted speed since I submitted. I am trying to fix this issue and I hope to do so before the night's end!
The music is supposed to play with the animation from start to finish, sadly, it doesn't want to cooperate :)
Once again thank you so much for the comments!
Nice..
nice but that song is off "Foster's Home for Imagainary Friends" so dont say its yours. i know you havent said the song is made by you but just for future reference.
I like the part when the gnome hides btw lol and then gets pwned by the troll. HORDE FTW
Well, I am glad you liked, however, you should pay closer attention at the credits. I cite that the music was from Foster's. :)
Thanks for watching however!
Good for newgrounds
It was good to see something blizzard rekated here as I am a fan. The animation was decent. With a little story added into the mix you might have something.
It was pretty good.
Seeing as this is your first submission I can see you only getting more adept at this as you go on. Great job, and good luck for all your future work.
Thank you very much for the compliments!
Decent.
It's good for a first submission. Heres some stuff to improve on though.
Please read through all of this review.
First of all when they turn it looks like they are flat. Try not to do that. Draw different angles of them. This takes more time but comes out great.
Second of all add some sounds other than the music from that cartoon (I forget what it's called)
Third make a longer movie. I know this is meant to be a short but try make a longer movie next time.
Fourth it looked too tweened. Try to do FbF (Frame by frame) Which is putting each limb on a different layer and animating them one at a time without using tweens. Takes much longer but it makes movements look more realistic when used correctly.
Fifth I like your style of drawing.
Sixth keep making somewhat humorous cartoons. It seems to suit you.
I hope you improve on the next one. Try to follow some of the critisism I have said. It will make your movies so much better.
-XRaider.
Thanks for your input! I will probably keep the way they turn though hehe ^_^