Absolutely wonderful storytelling abilities here!
You did a great job with this. I can see you're influenced by Ren and Stimpty and Rocko's Modern Life a bit too. This was just plain amazing, and I loved every second of it. The only thing was some of the audio was just too plain soft to hear (although at the time it was apparent that was the effect you were trying to give). Other than that it was brilliant. Please keep doing flash!