rely good
i thought this was a really interesting animation. it seemed to have a plot and you reallly portrayed the mental problem well. The only thing that spoiled the animation in my opinion was the poor sound quality, you should of got a male voice actor as it made alfred sound really girly, and the random shouting it just sounded too shrill and was very annoying after haivng turned up the speakers so i could hear the quiet talking parts.
The graphics really worked well with the whole theme of the animation. Kind of jumpy but ina good way, and the dogs didnt look half bad.
When alfred went and killed everyone, it looked like he was attacking them with a crayon o.O , not a weapon and around tht time for me the animation sort of broke down for a few seconds, may be my computer or it wasnt made properly.
but i liked your style, and as i said the only way i can think to improve this animation would be not to be the only voice actor, and to make the sound better and get a better mic, the sudden quietness then loudness was really irritating.