Very original
This flash may not have mind-blowingly amazing graphics but that doesn't matter.
I thought that the story was great, not just a radom gore-fest like the majority of stuff on Newgrounds, but a well though out storyline with a moral.
The music and musical timing with the actions, added greatly to this.
Overall a very good flash, with lots of thought put into it. Good job ;)
You'd be surprised with the actual thought that went into this. I'd say 80% of what you see is really me just saying "Well, what would work?" before animating it. Usually it works, but some times I have to go back and redraw a scene or redo the music to get it right. The next animation, however, I plan to fully develop before going into production.
I liked it
i thought the music was pretty decent and I liked how it change to go along with the story
I probably came up with a few dozen melodies just playing on my piano for the movie. I thought about what instruments are used in classical orchestras, that were generally used for old-time cartoons.
It's usually trumpets, tubas, pianos, percussion, and the occasional bass. Made use of them all.
I like the message
It was pretty good! I like the cartoony-like style of the whole flash. The music fit it perfectly as well, which is why I put a 10 in sound. There was no violence(except for the part where ONE red got his fingers scraped), however, a message like this has no need for violence. It made me chuckle at times as well.
There isn't much I can add though, some previous comments have spoken for me(NOT THE NEGATIVE ONES).
In short:
Great flash. Great message. It made me chuckle.
All my replies have said what I would usually say as well, in spite of that, thanks. Glad to see it made you laugh at least some of the time.
Unique to say the least
Very very unique, great use of sound effects (did you make then or were they made for you?) Good job :D
Nah, I made them. That should be painfully obvious. I don't think anybody would pay for work like that.
nice
This is the most unique flash i have seen at this sight, you have
potential!
4/5
Thanks for the great words.
I remember a teacher told me I had great potential once. Same dude called me an idiot like a month or two later.
Hard to trust people's words some times, you know?