Pretty phat movie
Nice job! It was pretty weird, yet funny. Keep up the good work.
Reviews for "Ytown Public 2"
Very Nice
Hmm... good work.
But I noticed a few things that could have been done better:
The first thing is that you maybe should buy a new mic, the voices are great and you don't want to destroy a very good flash with crappy sound, aye?
The second is that you might consider speeding up some animations a bit, they are very slow (maybe it's only because of my computer :)
The third and last thing is that there is some very wierd and twisted humor sometimes, like the dead rat... only looks stupid...
Hey does the name "Ytown Public" have anything to do with that you are from Ystad?
As I always say, Keep up the good work!
Annars är det en skitsnygg flash!
Some honest critique...
Marcus,
First off let me say that I think you have alot of talent and I love your artwork. You have a real knack for directing the scenes and the voice acting (tho low grade sound quality) is done very nicely.
I noticed a few things that would make this series better tho.
#1. and most importantly..THE SOUND. I know it cost money for a decent mic, and sometimes its still hard to get a decent sound, but this is really the first thing you should do. A clean sound can make all the difference in the world to lazy scrubs who cant make out the sounds, but are too lazy to read..heh. If you need any tips, or any voice overs for any parts, or any software to help with the final mix, let me know.
#2. The characters arent real defined. I know its just starting out and all, but I feel you need to give the characters more personality. Maybe you should add a few characters as well, and give motives behind the characters actions...such as why does the Principal hate kids so much, etc.
#3. I can tell you did a better job on the story board this time, good job. I think you need to try to put a little more humor in the series and make the stories a bit more solid.
Good luck on part 3, and I have some ideas for stories if you need any help, or want a few ideas, just let me know.
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McRhyme responds:
You think I should add depth to the character? Hello? Flash toons are totally 2D. This comment will make a brilliant joke in one episode. A see a man explaining the laws of physics in the cartoon world. Haha. More humor you say, well I add as much as I ever can. I aim to have 10 jokes a minute. Haha.
You will probalby be mentioned in the next episode, one way or another.
Dunno, not watched it yet
I want to be a bear, unless I have to have a microphone. I lost mine, and it's got crap sound
McRhyme responds:
I'm afraid you would have to have a mic. Otherwise you have to come and visit me in Ystad, Sweden.
Trivia, did you know that the city I live in is called Y-stad, which translated is Y-town. Now you know where that came from!
ha ha
good one can't wait for more kinda reminds me of college university and the voicing kinda stinked you could tell alot of them were done by the same person no I didn't read that in the credits but yes I DID whatch them
McRhyme responds:
Would you like to have a line or to in the next episode. It's pretty easy to do. Not hard at all. That might be cool? Interested in playing a bear? Anyone? Just a couple of lines...