Hmmm..
Sorry man... This just really sucks. I mean, I know that you really tried hard and it looks as if you've put a lot of work into it, but the finished product... well... it's not good. The story seemed interesting at first, but ... no... Also, a lot of the sounds suck... The dialogues are spoken to monotonously...
Check out College University for similar stuff that comes across a bit better...
Please don't feel bad, though. You've got talent! Just work on it a bit!!