Reviews for Oxygen

[prology]

hmm..

so, let me get this straight.

I am to understand that oxygen is running low...for some reason... and that the only people that can survive this oxygen depletion, is these Nazi guys with masks.

Ok. So how does this guy in the attic survive for so long?

I will put it bluntly: How is this guy BREATHING?

I mean, I thought the theme was the whole, you know, no oxygen thing. Why would these Nazi guys even need to kill every one? they should just suffocate.

Ah, but of course, they need to kill all the people hiding in oxygen plentiful attics. How could I have missed that, they need to kill these people for...

hmm..

fun?

notorious responds:

You comparing stuff to world war 2 should know that there were people wearing gas masks and people not wearing gas masks, not because oxygen was low.

DUH.

[darkpojo]

ummm

was this supposed to make since? I didn't understand any of it. o_O

notorious responds:

yes it was supposed to make lots of since...

since i ate your DOG!!

[crizzapimonia]

too slow

it needs a lot if work

[CoffeeHolic]

it's kind of boring...

a bit too long...
and what's with the random skeleton heads and stuff?
Please try to keep it compact, show only what is necessary to deliver the message.
change the music...it's kind of...dragging.....
not saying it's bad, but it's just not suitable for this film.

[fasdit]

Not very good. 2/5

It lacked a story, it seemed more like it was intended to be a prologue, however I do not think that in the context of this situation that will suffice for a high score.

The animation was sparse, you had a few drawings, and while they were okay I did not find them to be particularly moving. I also noticed that you simply used digital camera pictures of what is likely your own house, that is not animation or talent and I do not think it mixes well with the hand drawn work you threw in.

Try adding a story, some lines, better art work, more scenes, make something that isn't unsatisfying and lacking a story like this.

Perhaps some people were moved by the apocalyptic overtone you tried to create complete with sad music and people living in fear. I was not.

notorious responds:

this had an incredibly obvious storyline to it. I suggest you watch it a few more times, because the story is pretty well laid out right infront of you.