hmm well
uh not to bad i see some potential although i really think you need to work on a focal point for the animation there was a lot of rather random phrases (Spoilers here in)such as they come in thousands as well as a few others but i mean random is good in some places but it really didnt fit in the setting of this particular anmation i mean it seems as though your basic plot was the air was poluted with some kinda poison and so everyones trapped inside and theres these ''packs'' of people going around killing those who have survived indoors but it wasnt very clear and if the main character was so afraid of the guys comeing to resort to such an act as suicide ''ending his existance'' then the focal point should have been way more on the men comeing for him where you had very little focused on them or if it was the isolation and for lack of a better description ''cabin fever'' driveing him mad to the point where he would have such paranoia that he would simply perseve a rescue team as an army of men out to get him then you should have focused more on the isolation and rations running low though really you didnt display any direct focus on any particular point of anything and if you were trying to express insanity by this then the changes should have been much more rapid and clostrophobic to better express just how distraught the written narrarator was all in all it had no real focus and without that its not quite affective in catching the veiwers intrest leaving it rather vauge and boring no offence im kinda goin for constructive critisism like i said at the start of this review i definitely see potential in you so although i personally dint like this animation in paticular better luck next time and try to practice more on focus Gl :)