wow i like
nice work, keep at it!!!
wow i like
nice work, keep at it!!!
Not very good. 2/5
It lacked a story, it seemed more like it was intended to be a prologue, however I do not think that in the context of this situation that will suffice for a high score.
The animation was sparse, you had a few drawings, and while they were okay I did not find them to be particularly moving. I also noticed that you simply used digital camera pictures of what is likely your own house, that is not animation or talent and I do not think it mixes well with the hand drawn work you threw in.
Try adding a story, some lines, better art work, more scenes, make something that isn't unsatisfying and lacking a story like this.
Perhaps some people were moved by the apocalyptic overtone you tried to create complete with sad music and people living in fear. I was not.
this had an incredibly obvious storyline to it. I suggest you watch it a few more times, because the story is pretty well laid out right infront of you.
This is epic
Wow never have i seen something like this before. I really liked it, the elements of the story, the poetry and the eerie music went together perfectly. I was disapointed though because of its shortness. I would love to see more work like this. Great job. It was kinda creepy. lolz.
lulz.
Oooo...
I love it. Doomsday kinda thing, eh? I recognize the music at the end from the game Tri-achnid! But yeah, original idea, great style, great graphics. :)
Thanks for the good review!
very eerie
it was cool, your style was awesome