Tch, tch
Dude! Get better backgrounds! Theres a website that has a lot of good backgrounds that are from the game's sprite! Also, the same music is boring! Get more music! From what I ave seen its all right. And PLZ! Watch your spelling!
Reviews for "Mario's "Adventure?""
mr-alien1 responds:
Yeah I know. Bear in mind this was my first proper sprite movie.
Also, I misspelled on purpose.
good
good for a first flash. your pause button only paused mario, not the music or the background. Also was random. Good for a first! Keep working and youll be making some pretty good flashes soon
mr-alien1 responds:
Yeah i know, i'm a little shit when it comes to action script.
not bad
The animation was good but you need to give some indication of whats going on. some sound effects would be nice or at least not the endless theme tune in the background. It might be a good idea to make the pause and play buttons invisible until you move your mouse over it. Overall it was pretty good but it just need tweaking.
Oh and your not fooling anyone, I know you know bo-ching
mr-alien1 responds:
Yeah. I know. But. if you read my update, i'm making another sprite movie. But ALL the sprites will be drawn by me. It will be better than this.
I'm Confused...
This whole movie didn't really make any sesnse... For future referance please put a plot or at least an easily recognizeable one in there. One thing that helps is a little bit of dialogue.
But, it had good potential, you had excellent sprite animation! So just take more care for the plot and you'll have a solid movie!
Was it to be expected?
The score is low. This is due to the following:
This was basically mario moving from side to side against a different background. A single background. The Sky to beging with was rather lazily done, as was the lightning. All the other Backgrounds were rather simple.
I thought that you would go on to make a decent flash, as the only sprite was mario and transport, but this turned out to be boring. Sorry to have to say it, have a bit more content. Its your first time, but that does not stop you from making it interesting.
Sound effects would have been good, just a continuous loop of music for such a long time gets tedious.
Don't let this get you down, just try to make it more interesting next time. I wish you good luck, though by the looks of this, you won't need it - the potential is there.
mr-alien1 responds:
I have learnt from my mistakes and probably will not do any sprite movies for a few months. But when I do try once more I will try to make it more interesting. I am thinking of starting a factual series about science and things. I hope you (and others) will like it.