Reviews for Mario's "Adventure?"

[TheDeathOfHell]

Sure, why not.

Okay. It was pretty good. Just avoid going, I'm new so I deserve privelages. Do you think Tom was new once? Yes, he was. New to the whole thing. Do you think he said that when he submitted? No, why? Because he was the only guy. The moral of the story is. WE DON'T CARE. Nice movie though. It had nice graphics and lots of signs of a good spriter. Just try to have a story line. Such as write notes and stick em on your wall or something. It makes things much easier. And will get you a higher BA :)

mr-alien1 responds:

Did you go mental whilst typing the middle of the review? Cheers for the 6/10 though. Yeah... It's like July now and, to be honest i think i'm going to not do any spriting for at least a year, or two. But i've started on the first episode of a sci-fi series. I hope you like it.

[ARotar]

good

good for a first flash. your pause button only paused mario, not the music or the background. Also was random. Good for a first! Keep working and youll be making some pretty good flashes soon

mr-alien1 responds:

Yeah i know, i'm a little shit when it comes to action script.

[Egnio]

Not bad for a first Flash...

I was impressed when I saw it and you said it was your first Flash. Sir, I can't believe it. It's really good for a first Flash. I liked it, but still, looks a bit random...

mr-alien1 responds:

... You are the first person who's given Graphics, sound, interactivity, style, violence and humor all ratings above 0. Thank you... Oh and before I forget, I'm gonna start making a series about stuff to do with science, because I'm very clever. And I want to share my genius with the world. Or at least the percentage of it that goes on Newgrounds.

[E-102Gamma]

I'm Confused...

This whole movie didn't really make any sesnse... For future referance please put a plot or at least an easily recognizeable one in there. One thing that helps is a little bit of dialogue.
But, it had good potential, you had excellent sprite animation! So just take more care for the plot and you'll have a solid movie!

[Sacrificial23]

not bad for sprite flash

Pros:
Mario doing something new (plane, sub, spaceship)
play/pause menu
Well done sprite graphics

Cons:
What happened when he suddenly disappears
Zoomed out way too far
no plot

mr-alien1 responds:

Hmm...
Pros:
1.Those sprites are from Shyguy Kingdom.
2.Play/pause menu - too easy.
3.Thank you.

Cons:
1.He went back In time to stop himself from ever going to the moon.
2.Ok, I'm sorry.
3.Yeah I know. Couldn't think of one, I just plied together some random crap
I pulled out of the deapths of my brain.