Eh?
To be frank, I really didn't enjoy this movie much. I'm not entirely sure whether it was meant to be funny or serious, which (IMO) is a bad thing.
I thought your drawing skills were fairly impressive, as was your choice in music (which was let down slightly by the sometimes-too-sudden empty gaps with no sound whatsoever) and the fight scenes were well animated for the most part.
Unfortunately, this was let down by a horribly unbelievable plotline, bad wording and grammar, and poor character choice. The fact that Mario was in it really didn't matter - the fights were all DBZ-style and not many elements of Mario were in it besides the background scenes and the character base, which really wasn't enough to justify it being a Mario movie - you could take pretty much any other video game character and make the exact same movie without any change to the plot. Perhaps if you had replaced Mario & Co with DBZ equivalents, I'd have enjoyed it more (and probably found the clock thing funnier too).
Speaking of humour, I did laugh a bit the first time Mario went SSJ. Perhaps if you'd spoofed far more other cartoons/video games in the same manner, it'd have carried the humour a lot better.
In short, there's definitely a lot to be worked on before this can become the great flash it could have been.