Reviews for Chronicles of a Demon Ep1

[KillermanX]

A new series!

wow this was a great animation you made here it was very funny. I'm kind of disapointed that you did it in english. Doing it in you own language is what makes it great. I wouldn't care if they hated it, if they really did hate it why do some of them watch it over and over again? There's no need to change anything on your animation only if you have to like graphics, sound, violence, and humor. If it makes you feel happy then do it. Thanks again for the head up on this great animation.

Your Fan KillermanX always there to like everything worse or great

Darkar responds:

And once again thank you very much KillermanX! You shouldn't be disappointed. I was thinking... "I need a lot more audience. I need to create something global to get some." That's why I began with this project. Don't worry, I'll continue doing stuff in my language... I'm proud of it! But as I told you, I need more audience to make my other projects famous. JAW will never die! It's just resting for a while... Again, thank you vey much for your review and for being one of the greatest fans! ;)

[Asor]

Something to keep an eye out for

I think this is one flash that will gain allot of attention here on NG. Dont listen to people who say that you need to change your voices, or get actors. Your voices are what make this interesting also now that your going to a new plain their is no need to change. The only thing is if their are anymore American characters that clearly dont fit your ethnic background then yes you may need someone else.

Though their are a few issues besides and their very minor ones at that.
1) You should clean up the images a bit
2) Try to sink the voices and sounds a little better
3) Work on making yourselves sound different for other characters
But thats about it, keep up that great work Im waiting on the next installment.

Darkar responds:

Thank you very much for the review! I'll follow your advice!

[UncleDave]

fantastic writing

but the voice acting came close to ruining it...

i suggest

1) doing the voices in your main language, then putting subtitles

or

2) voice actors with less... unconventional accents ;)

other than that, great, make more

Darkar responds:

Thank you very much for the review, but you know what, I've already tried to make animations in my main language and put subtitles. You NG users hate them because they aren't in English.

[HeWhoHasNoLife]

Pretty damn good

No one aspect of this flash is particularly impressive, but it shows real potential.

Graphics: Standard cartoony look; fitting for the flash
Style: Random but cohesive is hard to do; you excel at it here.
Sound: The voices were grating in an unidentifiable way, otherwise quite good. I'd suggest either looking for a voice actor or simply working to improve yourself. The former gives you time to polish the art a bit.
Violence: Low level of violence in this one, but I look forward to seeing more later on in the series.
Interactivity: N/A
Humor: The translation bit was excellent, and it certainly beats out Xombie's attempt at humor. In other words, sequels may be front page material.
Overall: I look forward to seeing more of your work as time goes on.

Darkar responds:

Thanks for the review.

[death-to-jarrah]

Very funny XD

Loved it, I'll be waiting for part 2

Darkar responds:

Thank you!