Overall it is definitely worth a watch.
Also to the author, your english isn't bad at all, you only need some very minor improvements. Also the seemingly diverse cultural background and accents give it a nice quirky character. That's worded fairly badly but anyway, great job I'm looking forward to your next one!
Thank you very much! Hope to get it soon!
Nice
I'll come out right here and say there isn't a lot to say against this flash. Very well done. There are some very minor things that would make it even better though. One technical thing is the breathy noise that comes when a voice actor is too close to a mic or the mic is just plain crappy. Another little tip, "Narrator" is pronounced "Nare-rate-tore" and another tiny little thing was the line "How did you read that?" The voice actor (you..?) pronounced "read" as "red." In that sentence its "reed." I don't blame you though, the English language is real stupid sometimes..
Like I said I can't honestly say to you what you need to improve on the actual flash itself. Crisp and clean movements and graphics were a nice change from some of the stuff NG gets. 9/10 Rounds to 5/5 nice work.
Well, thank you very much for those tips! Really! I know I need to better my English... Anyways, thank you very much for the review!
Accents, emotions, and voice talent
Funny flash, the voice acting was great, kudos the the actors. The emotions the blonde headed character displayed were well timed and hilarious, keep it up bro, I hope to see more from you.
What a technical review! This really helps! Really! Thank you very much!
Cant wait for the next one
Haha this was great, keep up with it, i would love to see more funny stuff like this
Only regret i have was a little bit of the sound quality
In the next episodes you make, try to lay off of the echo effect like you had in the cave, i found it more annoying than anything else
otherwise,
great job!
cant wait for the next one
Ok that was a really nice review! Thanks! I'll take your advice!
Oh the baby!
It was good. Pretty good. Anyways, why did everyone have a russian accent?
Russian! Are you serious?! Come on man! I'm Mexican! I really don't think we sound like russians... Anyways... Thank you very much! ;)