poor girl
the flash only add some stuff you can make this without flash stuff just a story on paper then it is the same
nice try but i think it is not frontpage calibre
Reviews for "KAZAHANA: Beneath a Tree"
its just not upbeat enouf
you should try to make people happy with you ablity to make flash flims not try to depress them, not that im saying that you are a bad persion for makeing this short film.
Ahem.
Seeing as the narration is pretty much the main feature of this movie, I will share my opinions on that (not that the music or graphics were bad or anything).
There is one thing about the voice acting that bothers me. It's not something that is necessarily a problem, because it was, or so I felt, full of emotion, and the poem itself was well read. However, at certain moments, the tone of the voice didn't seem to match the context, which occured as very odd to me. It may just be me though.
Unfortunately, because of that, the feelings that are expressed by the character do not come across as genuine. Once again, this may be just me.
Also, at certain parts of the poem, the content becomes quite cliche and predictable, to the point where it is rendered almost meaningless. In other words, there is a lack of impact from the poem itself.
Not a bad piece of work though.
Hmmmm
This was genuinely touching.
Great voice over work.
This flash movie, touched me.
This flash has really touched me deeply. I feel exactly like this girl.
I'm so alone. :(