nice
I have one suggestion. the dude in the begining sucked, just because he didn't fit in. he stood out. idk, its just the artist in me, but I think for the begining when he was walking into the room he should have matched the room and been shaded along with it. then when he meets the monarch dude he should have been revealed. idk, to me it keeps its creepyness about it. but other then that I liked it.