I really admire you
You have great skill and talant, you have a overactive imagination wich is good for animators.
You can make a carrier out of strange animations like this1 here.
Keep em comin
Reviews for "Monarch"
DUDE
That was excellent -- the pencil style really adds to the dreamlike feel, and the haunting music is perfectly suited to the flash. Great work.
I agree with the last reviewer - the cow eating machine of doom is the scariest part.
sad but cool
i liked it alot, it pulled at my heart strings when the cows died though, nice job.
Well done!
I'll never look at a McDonald's the same way again. Very impressive piece of animation my friend.
Right, let's get down to business.
Graphics and Style:
Eight and nine respectively. The graphics take a small hit because stick figures and this kind of animation-type has been done before. Style gets a 9 because, like with graphics, it has been done before, but most people do it in flash. You my friend did it with your own hands and pens and whatever the hell else you used. It's real media, and that is something I can respect. Not only is it real media, but it's done very well.
Sound, a 9. No actual sound effects, but very well selected music. Music is everything to me in a piece of media work. Choose the wrong kind and your creation can come crashing down as a failure in my eyes.
Violence, 2. Not a lot of it, you use it to make a point. Slaughter of bovine creatures. It's used only when necessary and it isn't over the top. Well done.
Interactivity: 0. It's a movie.
Humour; I know you weren't trying to make something entertaining, but something that evokes thought.
Overall: 9. I'll look at your other stuff. You've certainly gotten my attention.
Uber Gewd.
Now..if I read the point you are trying to get across correctly, I totally am on the other side of the fence and in complete disagreement with you. That being said, this is a nice piece, well done, and with excellent music to back it up. I'll be looking forward to more from you, that's for sure. :)