Reviews for 12 (SMB)

[koreanmegastardragon]

very nice

but please, make the words easier to read

and learn how to spell. =D

Thisismyhobby1 responds:

i tried to find the best text color, i'll try harder

[Mopp4]

lol

although the layout was noobish, you compensated incredibly with the storyline and time progression. you captured it perfectly. good work :)

Thisismyhobby1 responds:

Thank you, ill make a better layout next time