Good job!
Liked:
-Song
-Style
-Idea
Disliked:
-It felt like a cycle(no major event)
Reviews for "-Machine-Made-"
cool
i like your art style hope you make more stuff besides what the others on this site may say good luck
The-Truth-Seeker responds:
I'm sure to make more. This is more or less a test reel of whats to come.
good
i think that this flash is rather good for a first time experience
i think you did a good job with the graphics and the details of the robot.
Pretty darn good...
This flash had some awesome graphics and really well designed backgrounds, and I really like the song you used. This flash would be a good precursor to a longer flash movie, one with a story behind it.
Maybe the robot is pronounced defective, but fights its way off the production line dodging lazers and saws and all that. You should give it some semblance of a human face to allow viewers to empathise with its flight to freedom, maybe just grey lines outlining eye sockets and a mouth.
Make sure you don't do too many camera zooms in and out, it distracts from the running motion of the robot if the view is jumping all over the place. There should be a front on view of the running robot's face with the facility looming behind him as he runs.
Overall, a really good start and I hope you make many more like this!
Keep going, don't quit!
Decent, for your First Flash.
For your first flash, you actually did pretty good. i agree with skotavus, this could be a "teaser" for a longer flash movie with a story. The Music was amazing. the robot you should make... how you say, more humanistic? (is that a word?)
All in all, a good First Flash. keep it up!
The-Truth-Seeker responds:
actually, this is just something i was experimenting with one day. I've been working on the main series for a while now. So hang on tight it's underway.