Reviews for -Pina Story-

[lmegera]

<3

Wow. I am impressed with not only your writing style but also the structure of the flash. I especially like the different angles of the each scene. This style is very reminiscent of the old samurai movies from the 70s like Zatoichi and Lady Snowblood, but also looks like it draws on some anime characteristics, especially the humor. The graphics were quite impressive, such as the castle scenes and I liked how you introduced the ninja fight with the spider crawling up the bamboo and then refocusing on the fight behind it. Very well done and keep it up. I really can't wait to see your next submission.

gener8ion responds:

thank you for the review~~
I tried to be more spontaneous with this flash~ with experimenting with angles~~ I am actually really bad with that~ I'm glad that you liked the style~

once again thank you ~~

[zephiel2]

Good Flash, But next time work on...

The graphics were great, but somewhat repetitive, and some scenes lasted too long. The same with the sound, you lacked change in sound, and it made it a little annoying. Also, there really was no clear style. But great storyline, and other then what i mentioned, great flash!

gener8ion responds:

thank you for pointing out the improvement needed section~ :)
I totally agree with you ~ and sound was very limited, mainly to reduce the size~ I guess that was my downfall :(
atleast you liked the story? :)

[evil-kitty20]

kitty power!!!! yay!

wow! i loved it! the graphics were wonderful! so was the sound! A little to violent for my taste you know with the pulling the heart out and stuff.....but besides that it was great! :)

gener8ion responds:

thank you kitty~~~
Is that the reason why you enjoyed the flash? jks :)

[KoolKat384]

Very Nice

I must I am impressed. I enjoyed it a lot. I want to see more! I like the humor that you put into the movie, it added to it.

gener8ion responds:

XD~ thank you for the review~~
atlast~ someone who actually liked the humor~ XD

[ThorClodofBlunders]

Good but too slow

First, let me say that the artwork in this cartoon is beautiful, and it was actually fairly good, and I'm surprised that you managed to do something with a length this long (very ambitious)

However, the actual animation, acting, and plot were all very limited. I wouldn't think a ninja would want to kill every single guard without a good reason (it should be a fast in/out job without a disturbance, right?). Also, the animation lacked any fluidness or any sense of weight.

My biggest gripe with the cartoon is the timing. Some sequences were too slow or held on for too long, and the cutting of the cartoon is really too choppy. The whole piece just doesn't flow naturally.

Don't get me wrong, it's still good, but I'd "study" other professional cartoons (stick to movies or anything done from 1940-1960 not on television. Television cartoons like this also tend to be drawn out waay too long, like Dragonball Z). Also, go on YouTube and watch videos where people do flips and jumps to get a sense of how humanoid creatures should move

gener8ion responds:

I think this is helpful information.
I am looking to always improve and your pointing out the sections helps me think, so thank you so much for your indepth review~

I hope to keep that in mind for my next movie~~