Hum..
Was dissapointed that there were no scenes when you made the wrong choices... made fucking up on purpose kind of boring.
Also, where you pull the pull the girl closer and say "what was that? ITs loud as shit in here!"
The majority of women I know would not..exactly like that..
In fact they would be wondering why you were grabbing them and pulling them closer when you just met them..in my opinion that would be a red flag move.
Also... i see a few other flaws in your reasonin.. most of the lines used in the flash would never actually work on women in a real situation.. most likley they would laugh at you...other than that.. it was entertaining..
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good job