Not front page worthy...
But still very nice. The animation was nice and i liked the art style. The voices were well recorded and the mouth movements were good. The background art was above average. Only problem I had with this was the joke. Pretty much once you get to the punchline it just wasnt funny. It was just sorta...too mild, so to say. Perhaps it was their facial expressions or whatever, im not sure. Very nice job, and I hope to see more of your work in the future.
Could've been better
It wasn't bad, animation was a tad bit choppy, as well, the ending could've really used some work.
it could have been funnier....
the jokes were to plain, spice itup duude, apart from the dat it was ok.....but i really recomend you make more submissions, there real good, just add more funny.
Just a tad to cliche to be funny
The animation in this movie was very well done. I didn't really like the style though, but thats just my opinion I guess. The voice acting was quite well done as well. The only thing that bothered me about this cartoon is that it was not funny at all. This has been done before alot of times, and most of them we're better when it comes to humor I guess.
I c an tell that you put quite some work into this but it was just lacking originality and humor.
Just work on these things and you've got something good!
ok
A lot of wasted keyframes. For the work that was obviously put into this the story and 'joke' really sucked. seriously lame. Next time you put all that work into making a good looking flash, please spend the time or get someone eltse to write the story for you before hand. Ok I made my point that script writing isn't your strong point. Also the characters had so much animation for just standing around it was distracting. many people use maybe 5 different fames of mouth animation to get a point across. Sometimes less is more.