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i agree with blaze you need more emotion in you talking like you will regret those words they seem like not angry anough and same with were did he go it sounded normal it didnt sound like a question like WHERE DID HE GOo add like it more louder with the ending like a aussie accent were every thing sound like a question
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that song is one of my favs but you should not have used it for this film! the film its self was not too bad, but i found the voices annoying.
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I dunno it seemed kinda rushed. I thought that maybe a cool fight scene might make up for it but that kinda sucked too. Only suggestion I can make is that you should take more time on the next episode.
I know what your trying to do here...
Its just that it doesn't quite do it. Your going for a dramatic story, set in a dramatic environment, with dramatic characters. But it seems a little rushed, the voice acting is over-acted, and the movie clips seem to warp all funny. Just need to take your time on future projects...
i noticed alot of problems
theres a loop on the music it doesnt stream also u dont have any animation at all hardly this is just a bunch of pictures when you think about it the guys streched at times also when making a running sequence put in more than 3 frames per step and dim the music its too load 4 the voices thats all i can rem right now umm try to fix up those things ^^ it b great