Good, but rough
The animation needs work, especially when they were talking though the artwork isn't bad. I like the integration of music, but i think you should use different tracks when transitioning.
Reviews for "Illusions of Immortality"
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This flash trips over itself
It has a consumate style to it in some frames and then there is this occassional break from this with a crudely animated sequence or an extremely unconvincing wide shot. Despite what others said, the basic and bare animation seemed quite appropriate to me, although I got the feeling it was more necessity than choice. Unfortunately this became problematic in sequences that required clean, smooth animation to convincingly depict the action, such as stamping on the guys head, and falling over. Those parts were just so clunky and awkward that it dragged the overall quality of an otherwise quite good flash down. There was also one major gripe in the dialogue, "what? Where did he go?" which was just kinda cringeworthy.
Pretty good
I liked it lots, good job.
huh
I kinda remember the first few episodes of this on the Awful Link of the Day on somethingawful.
This flash is a vast improvement over those. Do you think you can put the old ones up, if you still have them? They were terrible, but hilarious. You've really come a long way. I mean, this isn't great, but still. Good job.