that was phenomenal in a hilarious way
that was phenomenal in a hilarious way
lol nice story
i like the story and the moral of it lol it reminds me of how deep little childrens books are but just that they cant see it
very intresting i giv eit a 4/5 9/10
Kids stories can be twisted, dark and much more complex than you realise.
Nice.
Good Job. I Was Thinking The Narrator Should Have Some Feeling to his Voice, but.. It Was Really Alright. Nice Job.
kewl
this remindes me of the time i lost my cat,Mini.
She wanted to go outside so i let her out and 2 hours later she didn't come back so i looked all over for her but i coulden't find her so i put up signs on posts and i went home and the next day i heard a "meow" and another and another so i followed them and i found Mini stuck under my back porch,lol.
AWWWWWW,
how cute and well done, perhaps you should have it published!