Oh where do I start first?
Considering the opening drawings are either tracings or some other graphic program work from pictures off of the Dark Sun settings books and boxed sets, when the artist did his own work, it was mediocre at best. As for the violence. gee how many heads have to come off in these? And why is someone impressed with that? That's just dumb. Your style is lacking, I see no story whatsoever because you don't even have a dialouge with the characters in the trailor. The sound was ok, but at least edit the sounds static and pops out. I know my system is just fine because I tested soon after watching this toon and nothing was wrong. And the animation was choppy to stiff, but if you are still learning the trade of animation that's understandable, no one starts out pro. Well keep trying kiddo!