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Reviews for "I love you, but..."

Funny!

A nice music video. Fin and KoKicker rock!

i <3 u too :P

was kinda funny, and original! i liked it.

finefin responds:

awww. and i <3 u too, GoldenHammer ... kinda :P

pretty good

i thought you did good, pretty odd, but your drawings might compete with joe-cartoon. :P my opinion.

finefin responds:

your opinion is appreciated :D

I like it.

At first, I thought it was going to be a short, stupidly-repetitive thing, but as it went on, I liked it more and more. I like the use of the text, and the way the words played off of each other like they did.

I think the flash really took off after the 2 question marks formed the heart. Afterwards, it was much more creative, with the eye and the butts and whatnot.

What I would suggest is that you add more to the very beginning. It wasn't very interesting, since the guy just did one movement, the lyrics hadn't kicked up yet, and it didn't really draw me in until later. Some people might even give up on watching the whole thing just because the beginning is too slow for them, since attention spans are in low supply on the internet. Spice up the beginning to help hook the viewer, so they watch the rest of it, which is where it really gets good. I hope you do more like this in the future.

finefin responds:

I want to thank you for this detailed and fair review -- I'm happy that you like my flash! So.. yeah.. Thank you very much!

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I like it. voted 4 =)

finefin responds:

thank you :D