WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Man tihs was touching, usually I blam stuff like this but I guess it hit on a nerve, ESPECIALLY THAT ENDING! I really hope that you make another epidosde with this , good or bad its bound to be worth while and nother 5, 5's and 0's is all I vote
very good
im always warmed by these flash submissions, anyone, and i mean ANYONE, who can right and make from the heart like that, thinking about everyword and image thats put into it, planing all the gaps and tension building areas to rise the occasion is more than alright by me. im a pretty philisophical guy myself and well, i gues i speak for evryone wen i say i know exactly where ur coming from with the message in the flash. personally i think the grading system is harsh on submissions like this, there should be a seperate category for philosophy/love/emotion as there is no way that its fair to degrade an amazingly deep story line with the fact that the graphics where slightly droopy (for want of a better word)....the best bit, the ending , 'Iris' is one of my fave songs and the ending line was great, a real cliffhanger and it captured the very feeling that we all have in our gut in those situatiions....i look forward, with tremendous vigor, to your next submission, and i hope you folow the same path that created this wonderfull story
Great story, very compelling.
I personally did not like the South Park style visual that you used. If these are your characters I felt that you should have your own way of drawing them, not borrowing somebody else's style. The story itself was very good, though, and the quotes and such at the end were very helpful to the story. The few times that there were voices they sounded kind of awkward, I'm not sure if it was the volume in relation to the background music or the actual voice, but it wasn't quite right. Other than those few small things, though it was wonderfully done. 0s in interactivity and humor because it wasn't, but it wasn't meant to be so that didn't even calculate into my overall score. I WANTED to just leave them blank but it wouldn't let me.
nto so bad...
I marked you down a couple of points since the characters looked like they were almost straight out of South Park. But hey, atleast they aren't stick men.
woot man!
this series.... wow.... this series....... awesome. it didn't a tear to my eye, but it's still a helluva story. i liked the fact that you used south park-esque animations and that there was a little voice acting in a few of them. kagome must be very proud of herself. If i could make flash of this caliber, i'd go and join you in your flash-making brilliance. i say you did well here. im faving all 4! i hope you will make more, much more, because the story just wowed me at how ad it is to have love but to never see her. I've been in a situation like this myself, its a helluva problem. been dead inside since. i cant believe he starts smoking though! i guess with all that stress and emotional problems, he started the habit to calm down...... its understandable.