I really liked your story telling... but
I love this series, but the only real problem I have is that there really isnt any animation going on. But, then again, perhaps if there was too much movment then it would detract from the story telling... regardless, I really relate to your character there, I even had his same hair, and I would get beat up too, and I had a gf that I loved dearly for so long and she is now gone forever.... anyway, good job overall, I cant wait to see how it ends.
Good thought...
The idea and message of this story is quite down to earth and, actually, reasonable. Very easy to relate-BUT- the way it was presented just didn't sit right. It felt too, well, cynacal. To nagative, almost emo. I wanted to love it, but it just sorta kicked me on the inside a little. Not saying its bad, it just didn't appeal to me. Anyway, keep up the work, as long as it strikes a chord with at least one person, it is worth making.
Good work.
To the last guy to review...
Yes, it could happen. I'm in the process of chasing a girl that I know is going to take at least five years to catch up with again and make her fall in love with me again...
great
The story was really good and the music flowed real well with it too.
The only thing that nags me is that for 5 years he still's chasing her.
In today's changing world, this would never happen. Thanks for bringing back
what could of happened.
Beautiful story
Very sad, it make me cry multiple times, should be made into an actual movie I think, with the write people it could be done very well
Either continue the story or start a new one, I need more.