Well...
Like the last reviewer, I have a couple plusses and a couple minuses.
The Plusses:
+Finally, a vulture that doesn't SUCK!
+The Zantaboan can FLY!!
+Dropship turrets! (Did you know dropships had guns in the SC Beta?)
+I don't care what anybody says, I still love the voices.
+Excellent take on Mind Control, the zerg didn't "change color" or anything.
And the minuses:
-Zantaboan looked a little sketchy chasing the three guys in the cave.
-The green marine died :(
-The dark archons didn't really move or turn.
-The very end was a bit rushed (who rescued the yellow guy? How did the dropship survive 5 scourges? Was that even the same ship?)
-The admiral's decision to keep the Zantaboan was a bit spontaneous.
-Why didn't the protoss abandon the terran after the admiral decided to keep the Zantaboan?
However, you still did a great job and I'm a big fan. Keep 'em coming.