Wow nice work
Wow this was great, abit big but still very nice work, good grapgics and a good style, You may want to compress the file as it was abit larg and for users with 56k such as myself might have issues with downloading the file, just something to think about when the file gets that big. very nice flash keep it up.
Abit big but good flash.
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this was way better
Is this based on a anime or something like that? i thought that maybe the ppl in this movie needed voices as it did not make to much sence
this is based off a story I had started back in 8th grade. And yes, it isn't supposed to make too much sense, just random shots of a long and complicated story. Be you upset or confused or just giddy with eye candy, its that kind of confusion I was going for. :)
Are you alright?
What was this? no story line... the only good things we're sound and graphics....But that's not everything you need for a flash.I'm gonna say it was alright but next time give it a point
Cool, but a two part 8 meg trailer?
I thought it was pretty cool, pretty impressive camera direction and frame by frame work. The part that bugged me the most is that its a trailer.
You burned yourself out for 8 months on just a trailer.. to me it seems like way too much effort than what its worth... way too much hard work for just giving people a sampling of something. To me it would have been more worthwhile to actually spend the 8 months on the actual movie..
storyline was close to nil, some of the rotoscoping seemed forced, and i cant figure having people sit for an 8 meg download for something that isnt a completed project.
Based on the scores NG has to rate you get high marks on gfx,style,sound,violence etc but overall i think its a little bit disappointing as a whole experience. The user doesnt leave with a sense of satisfaction and you spent so long delivering an experience that isnt a memorable one.
And so overall i can only give it a 5. because i think you've accomplished the first half of what a successful entry should do but your still missing the second.
yes, i agree with you there, normally an animation that takes 8 months would be an actual story and what not. However in my defense for this particular animation it started out as a class assignment where we have to simply show we under stand motion and the aspects of animation. i can't just go and do a whole story when i have 3 other classes going and get them all done AND make an actual episode of something. I doubt I'll have the time to do so in the next 6 months too since I'll be starting portfolio classes and actually make my professional portfolio, so not much time to do this project.
Still I hope to finally deliver the goods eventually and make my series something memorable. If people have been looking at my stuff for this long, its what they deserve.
And thank you for your honesty. Its great to get critiques that I can grow on.
Thank you.
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See the review i left for part one... pretty much the same thing i'd say. Except this one had more action.