It's good, uh, for a stick figure flash.
The fluid action, 3D graphics and voice acting all set this apart from a lot of other action-based stick figure flash cartoons but... #1 at the portal?
It's nice animation and you obviously know how to make something flow cinematically, but in the end, this cartoon (or, more specifically, this episode) is just a flashier version of a dozen cliched ideas stuffed together.
I know it's stupid, but I think I would have liked it more if the animation were more... fleshed out? The whole stick figure style just turns me off, I guess.
I can tell a lot of effort and talent went into this, though, so I'm sure you're not confined to such productions. This wasn't really my slice of pie but I expect you'll do better things in the future.