Back to the drawing board.
The animation and the style were great, I can see where all the time and effort went; however the dialogue was just too crude and juvenile, I'll make an estimate and say you're 14 year old trying to sound like stamper. He can pull it off, you can't.
You're simply too young for mature humor, next time let a grown up write your movies, there's plenty in the writer's forums.
I'm 15 thank you very much, and I can't use cool phrases like, "Ass over tea kettle," anymore because I used them in previous movies, and I'm running out of original dialog :S
Awesome work
Very enjoyable and a great addition to anyones favorite list. ;) Seriously though this was a very good short and I like the way you styled it as if it was done on paper. I really do love the credits music as well. Seeing from one of your review responses to another user I really do hope you make this into something more than just a short.
-Master
It WAS done on paper... Anyway, thanks for the review. I don't know why I like the music too? XD But it's stuck in my head. It's only a short because this was more like a test run... I'll make my next movie longer.
Very Unique
I have to say, that if you built upon this you could make some very good flash.
Perhaps.
Over-all enjoyable, really creative
I'm no major flash artist, nor am i a critic, however i enjoyed this. It was clear you spent alot of time on this, and it is really creative. I love the microsoft sam voice, definately a nerd moment. The characters where cool, if i was you i would spend more time on the voices and make a series of episodes for this with a good story line, it could become a hit.
Lol, thanks. This was sort of a simple test project, now since I know it works, I'll gladly make these movies with full story lines :3
Unique!
I have not seen anything quite like this before. It is highly stylized, in a good way. And you can draw well in pencil & paper, so you can pull this off. This flash could pass simply on the novelty of the graphics, yet you have not neglected to retain good 'ol ock humor. This is a definate fifen from me. I do hope you make more like this.
I'm pleased you support all things Paper' Ish. I'll surely do more like this, it was a great experience. Thanks man.