Reviews for Intelligent Critique

[Haggard]

Funny

It's funny what you did in this flash. The reading was very nice and the voice fit pretty good to what was being said.

However, while I liked that you put the review on the screen it kinda annoye me that the graphics and little animations you did constantly where moving over the text I tried to read.
Sure, I could have just listened to the voice, but when there's text on the screen I try to read it.

Also, it was kinda hard to concentrate on the graphics while the text constantly scrolled in the background. Maybe you should add subtitles. Two lines of text and the rest of the canvas can be used for the graphics/animations.

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W-P-S responds:

what the hell is up with all these review request club reviews?
there are like
6 of them

what the fuck

[1man1voice1movment]

wow.......

mind giving me the adress of the ifdiot who wrote that reivew????? its people like him who ruin this world. make it a HELL of alot worse....id like whis adress oplz so i can......"deal" with this littile problem >:)
keep on doing your twisted think WPS

[LysergicPanel]

this may be seen as a joke

But it is a true tragedy that so many of these laggards misuse their right to review a piece of somenone else´s work, some users on this page cannot understand that the reviews are meant to offer one´s constructive critique, not to insult the author because the flash was mayhap not of their taste, or are so grandeur they feel like bigshot hollywood assmunchers, or just so pathetic and worthless in real life that they feel empowered by the anonimity of the internet.

Well, if you plan on posting something like "beat my challanges " and proceed to write a list of ridiculous achievements on a RPG game, for instance, you should at the very damn least , on a separate paragraph, write your opinion about the quality of the flash

On the flash, I have viewed some of the author´s other pieces and I feel this one was a step or three behind, although the drawings were not of the best quality, let alone of the author´s caliber, they were used to express thoughts, which was done in a comic and digestible fashion.

[InsertFunnyUserName]

3/5

It was pretty good. Your animation was pretty smooth and the voice-over was quite amusing. I liked at the beginning where the rock fell down.

However, I didn't like how you scrolled the review screenshot over the animation until it took up the whole screen. I think the review should have taken up only part of the screen and stayed that size throughout the entire flash instead of taking up more and more space. I suggest maybe putting the review on one side of the screen, the animation on the other (maybe overlapping over at times) and then making the flash dimension bigger so you have more room. I don't know, just a suggestion.

Also, I think that you shouldn't have used a gradient on the badger, because the rest of the flash didn't use gradients and it looked a bit out of place.

[Review Request Club]

[Fro]

~ Review Request Club ~

~ Animation/Graphics ~

I really liked the style of animation that you used. It really wasn't the best, but it did match the overall feeling of the submission quite well. Another thing that was kind of questionable was the review that slowly went up. I actually liked that you had it go that way, but I think it would have been better to change the transparency of it so you could slightly see the animation going on behind it.

~ Story/Content ~

Ha, I always love the ones where people are making fun of dumb reviews. It just really goes to show how dumb some people are and how excited they get over the smallest things.

I felt that it was hard to read when you had the images popping in over the review. Perhaps there could have been a way to only have the images pop up over the part that wasn't being read at the time so it wasn't as distracting.

~ Audio ~

The voice acting was a nice tool to help with the humor. By the way I spelled humor right. On a normal submission this might not be the best voice acting, but very fitting for this piece indeed.

~ Overall ~

There were a few things that could have cleaned the submission up a bit, but it's always nice to make fun of bad reviews. :)

~ Review Request Club ~