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Reviews for "Intelligent Critique"

That was a rather unusual review.

That little punk needs to learn some manners (or at least how to proofread his reviews). Unlike him, I actually enjoyed that Foamy parody that you did. Like I said before, it was beautiful in its own nightmarish way.

That guy..

Got a serious owning. xD

Surrealism

So this is a pretty good take on how to respond to an abusive review. Yes, there is the cross icon, to report it as abusive, but then no-one would know about such a review (and such an appalling, but humorous one at that).

You have a great way of conveying what was funny about this review, from the voice acting through the little caption animations that accompanied the piece. I think it could have been made slightly better, if you'd have gone fro the animation and used subtitles, as opposed to drawing the animation over the top of the review text, as that interrupted my flow, as was reading through the text at the same time as the commentator was reading through it.

Very funny references put in there, especially the grammar nazi part, where you refer to his comment about "humours", which I found particularly amusing. I would ask that you please come up with the lighter alternative to this rather negative stereotype and show off some good reviews in a funny manner, such as this.

[Review Request Club]

W-P-S responds:

review request club, reviewing things that's 4 years old

Funny

It's funny what you did in this flash. The reading was very nice and the voice fit pretty good to what was being said.

However, while I liked that you put the review on the screen it kinda annoye me that the graphics and little animations you did constantly where moving over the text I tried to read.
Sure, I could have just listened to the voice, but when there's text on the screen I try to read it.

Also, it was kinda hard to concentrate on the graphics while the text constantly scrolled in the background. Maybe you should add subtitles. Two lines of text and the rest of the canvas can be used for the graphics/animations.

{ Review Request Club }

W-P-S responds:

what the hell is up with all these review request club reviews?
there are like
6 of them

what the fuck

Burning church?

Is that burning building a church? :/