Okay
This was a reasonably decent story about two guys fighting for a girl's affection... but you ruined it with the Mario crap that everyone on Newgrounds does. What the hell is it with every single submission being a Mario entry? It's such a waste.
There was absolutely no need for the characters to be stolen from Nintendo, you could have just drawn three stick figures and the impact would have been the same, except it would have been more original and less annoying.
But whatever I say won't make a difference; people are still going to continue wasting their ideas on Mario cartoons just for the "lolz teh" brigade who will give it 10/10.