Wow, that was.... Lame
Atleast it was better than the last one I guess, hopefully the next one wll be as good as TN 3 or the old TN 5, also you guys REALLY, DESPERATELY need more voice actors. Just sayin.
Reviews for "Tomorrow's Nobodies Ep.5"
I've said it before,
TN is the most professionally produced series on newgrounds, but you guys can't get passed the immature and easy jokes.
I was really hoping this would be good, I wanted it to be, but I found myself kind of bored and there was no real plot. Everything felt like it was setup for a good ending, but it was a total cop-out.
Live action stuff in flashes never work out, it breaks the reality of the series and makes the whole production seem worse.
Tomorrows Nobodies is still better than College University (which doesn't even attempt to make jokes), but what you really need in the series is to come back to the ground every once in a while for realism. I know this is only one review out of a sea of "I LOVE YOU!!!"s, but I think that you guys should spend more itme on writing the actual episodes, and try to be clever instead of random.
Chase: Keep up the good work as far as animation, but youyr character is really uneeded and drags down the series as far as I can see. You're just a pothead version of David who there is occasionally thrown half a fat joke at. If you want the series to be as good as possible, cut out Chase and replace him with a made up character who chase could even voice who is more dynamic.
Hell, while you guys are at it you could cut out Chris, eric is already the straight-man to David's craziness, and I think that TN as a series could pretty much be scrapped.
You guys as a group have plenty of potential to make another better series that has characters instead of rough characterizations of yourselves. I think if you guys worked hard enough you guys COULD make something television-worthy, but this definitely isn't it.
Tomorrows-Nobody responds:
You're wrong.
jump the shark
When you include live action video to supplement your animation the series has officially jumped the shark
Great graphics, but otherise not the best
Well I must say I am impressed with your graphics in this episode. It's one of the best here on newgrounds. Sadly, however, that's one of the only things I'm impressed with.
You don't seem to have much of a storyline at all. The humor is childish and immature. I mean come on I don't know what all of you see in joking about Jewish people. Oh wow you said Jew hah... just no. If that is what is getting you the most laughs that's pretty sad. Just my opinion, however. Some people may like crude humor, but I don't take to it.
The sound was just ok. There was nothing really unique about it but it was decent. I'd suggest trying to get some different types of sound into the episodes.
So basically try and improve the humor and maybe add some more sound and you'll have a much better flash video.
Great art and sound, but not funny for everyone.
There is no denying it: you guys got talent. I've seen your website, the episodes, and (wow!) the NG awards. But, I have to say, I'm not a big fan. Let me break it down:
The graphics are great. I own Flash 8 and have taken a class (high-school class) on it and know that it is harder than it looks. You guys must've spent a lot of time on the art, story, voices, etc. and I commend you four on the unbelievable effort. Currently, I don't have a flash to my name but I do know the work that goes into it.
The part with the live-action was a well-helped tool to the epsiode and was very clever. :D
Now for the humor. I personally didn't find it funny at all. I'm sorry, but I didn't even smile watching this. But hey, that's just me. My sense of humor didn't agree with your guys's and made my experience very, very terrible. I myself enjoy more slapstick/random humor in Flashes and tend to be drawn towards that side of NG comedies. Sorry, but that is what I think.
As I've said, Chase, Eric, David, and Chris, you guys have talent. I was in awe at your awards and recognize that you guys (as of now) have the #1 all-time high scoring submission. I voted 3/5 because of the effort and hours that must've went into this but I really didn't enjoy it. I can't offer many suggestions because there really wasn't too much that was "wrong". The only thing I can think of is just a little better voices. They were amazing, don't get me wrong, but I would have liked more emotion and spontaneous reactions (sounded like it was scripted).
Remember, I'm just one person. Everyone so far worships this and they probably do because their sense of humors match yours. Nice job on the Flash but a note to viewers: you will either love this, or hate it.