Reviews for Shadow: The Purpose

[brinx9]

Work a bit harder on the voices.

The words fits but the voice was not within the character. What I mean is that you must fit the voice into the character. Your shadow's voice didn't seem to fit with shadow. You'd need to get into a darker/angry voice into him. And Eggmans vocie... Well lets just say that his voice sounded as if he was a demon. For him you just got to try and find the perfect evil scientist voice that may just fit him. But that's what I think at least. I mean really who would want to listen to some guy who has never made a flash movie or something like that. Well anyways if you keep trying hard you'll be liked in no time or something like thst. Well l8a.

[puppet1]

crap

lots and lots of crap

[Roundtree-X]

ok...you can do beetter I bet....

I know your trying to tell a story here, but try to cut it down a little...there was a little too much talking going on. Other then that it was ok.

[TheVulcan]

Nice start

lol, ur doing better than i am! Im still trying to get the hang of flash b4 i release my 1st! One thing u could improve on is ur voices, i found shadows voice pausing sometimes and a little cheesy. Work on that, nice work though

[gotax]

A good start

Nice work with the sprites and backgrounds. Its got a good scene at the end. A few problems with the script, for example, when Shadow says that he needs to get out of this facility when he really is just on a single platform floating in the middle of space.

The author would need to work on his intro, the flashy 2 frame platform to simulate high speed movement doesn't really work, proably because Shadow isn't quite moving his legs fast enough.

The only other problem would be the sound, the music is too loud and its crushing the voice-over, which sounds a bit echo-ish and quite cheap-ish, really. It doesn't sound like Shadow, nor did Eggman sound quite like him.

All in all, a good start, I'm beleive we will be seeing much better stuff from him in the future.