Good start.
This is a good start to a flash. I am intriged to learn more of this rooster...
Reviews for "-cola-"
MoisesManzo responds:
his names cola, and hes going to be in action packed cock fight!!!!
Excellent intro...
but this lacks the rest of the movie. This was much too short.
Also, I believe this would be excellent if you had a background, and in one scene, a sky.
The artwork was good, but I can't say anything about a storyline because this lacks one, as I previously mentioned.
To keep it brief: make longer; add story; background/sky.
MoisesManzo responds:
well this is just the intro to the series and its going to actually be better....alot better graphics i made this like in 20 minutes
Well, it's a start.
This is a decent start, but I think it needs some more work. I realize that it's a preview, but even for a preview, it doesn't tell much about the series or really leave me very curious about it. It's a guy and a rooster, running and standing there... that's about it. Not much excitement there.
Also, the drawing styles changed dramatically from frame to frame, which threw me off a lot. Consistency there would have helped.
I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with the actual movie. I just wasn't too impressed with the preview.
MoisesManzo responds:
dont worry man im going to make it have better graphics and full story in cart22n.
check out cart2n, another of one my flash
ummm.... ok
ok it was pokemon but where was the story?
MoisesManzo responds:
it wasnt pokemon........but now that you mention it it does seem like it.