Nice start...
Try doing an ostrich instead...
It's really interesting if that bird can fly in flash...
Cheers :)
Reviews for "-cola-"
MoisesManzo responds:
im sorry but,i like the rooster.thanks for the idea though.
=]
Well, it's a start.
This is a decent start, but I think it needs some more work. I realize that it's a preview, but even for a preview, it doesn't tell much about the series or really leave me very curious about it. It's a guy and a rooster, running and standing there... that's about it. Not much excitement there.
Also, the drawing styles changed dramatically from frame to frame, which threw me off a lot. Consistency there would have helped.
I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with the actual movie. I just wasn't too impressed with the preview.
MoisesManzo responds:
dont worry man im going to make it have better graphics and full story in cart22n.
check out cart2n, another of one my flash
Good start.
This is a good start to a flash. I am intriged to learn more of this rooster...
MoisesManzo responds:
his names cola, and hes going to be in action packed cock fight!!!!
Excellent intro...
but this lacks the rest of the movie. This was much too short.
Also, I believe this would be excellent if you had a background, and in one scene, a sky.
The artwork was good, but I can't say anything about a storyline because this lacks one, as I previously mentioned.
To keep it brief: make longer; add story; background/sky.
MoisesManzo responds:
well this is just the intro to the series and its going to actually be better....alot better graphics i made this like in 20 minutes