We need this for n00bs!
This is a really good idea. It was well detailed and easy to understand. Good job. Keep making good quality flash like this.
Reviews for "Newground$ Tutorial"
HomerDough responds:
Thanks
...SOMEWHAT HELPFUL...
+COMMENTS+:
I like this idea, and the music was pretty good, too.
+IMPROVING+:
A lot of the pictures were kind of pixelated, first of all. Also, as the last reviewer mentioned, tehre wasn't a lot of original work put into this. Oh, and maybe you could name it 'NewgroundS' quiz...?
2/5
HomerDough responds:
Okay. Thanks for the advice and comments
K
^^Good Points^^
Much better than you NG quiz. I liked the music, it was a neat tune, and wasn't annoying or low quality. There is a quite a bit of good information in this tutorial for the people that are less exprienced on NG, and I think that you did a good job with explaining most things. I could see this being useful.
^^Needs Improving^^
Most of this info is taken right from the Help section of NG, so I can't say you had a lot of original work on this. Also, I didn't really like how when you went back to the menu the music restarted.
HomerDough responds:
Thanks and I know about the music
It's a helpful Tutorial for newbies on Newgrounds.
You picked a good choice of music for this tutorial. I liked the music, it was pretty catchy. The first topic, Experience, was explained really well. It was neat how you showed all the level icons 1-30. The second topic, Blams and Saves, was explained really well as well. It was also neat how you showed all the B/P Ranks. The third topic, Flash award, was explained decently. It needed a little bit more though. The fourth topic, Whistle Levels, was pretty well explained. I like how you showed the Whislte levels. Also, there are about 3 people that have the Gold Whistle, not 2. The fifth topic, Book Marking, was easy to explain and the new people on Newgrounds can learn that quickly. The sixth topic, Batting Average, was explained decently. Could of been more to it like pictures or the rest of the grades like D's and F's. The seventh topic, Statistics, are links about the best Newgrounders and Flash Authors on Newgrounds. The eighth topic, Dictionary, is for someone that is a complete newbie to the internet, very helpful. The ninth and last topic, Cool links, were some pretty cool flashes that show records and other stuff in your profile. This is one really good helpful tutorial! Overall, this Tutorial was helpful and I enjoyed watching it. Good Work! Responses are gladly appreciated. :)
-$eamonky
HomerDough responds:
Wow. Nice review. Thanks
Almost average
I already knew most of that stuff, so I was dissapointed that you didn't bring anything new to the scene.
The graphics were mediocre at best. The images of the daily awards and other images were very pixilated and had bad quality. Also, you didn't draw most of that stuff. Also, there was no style because most of it cou;d be found in the rules/FAQ.
Not much violence, humore, sound, but there was some interactivity. Not much to call it a game, but enough to earn you a few points.
Improvements? Make the images have better quality, and try giving other tips as well. Include more information with brighter graphics. It was pretty hard to read.
Overall, mediocre flash and has a lot of room to improve on.
Grade: D+
HomerDough responds:
Okay thanks for the advice