eh?
i liked the first 2 this ones just wierd
Reviews for "TehKar-Seduction-Ep3-eFin"
bad
well the first and second were way better you just ruined the series with this on
like come on no pictures and a bad story sorry but if ya dont revive the series with the next one u rscrewed
A fine third story
Of course, I think we all would've preferred if you had finished the "good girl" portion, but on the whole, combined with the other two, I think this would be a great series. This one was a bit more intricate than the other two, and it certainly offered a different situation from the last two which were more trial-and-error based.
Arrivederci!
ehhh
well,what i read was alright....but..the text needs to be put on the screen faster,i got bored almost instantly just sitting and waiting for it to be put down.it was okay.
This seems to be more your style
I've seen this kind of thing before on Quizilla, and making the reader into the main character can be a dangerous course of action, but you pull it off well. Sad to say I don't have enough of an attention span to read through all of the options, and I played the 'bad girl' first. Your writing only needs a little work, as it's a bit too casual for such intense writing. Otherwise, you did great with this one! (Though I must say, I did enjoy the shameless smut of the first one)