Good
Ive liked your other works and its difficult to rate this one because it is not a flash but more of a digital story. a very well done digital story btw. your other flashes were ok and i cannot say that ne of the things you've worked on have been perfect but you still did a very good job with this story. good luck with whatever you decide to do.
:)
I'm sorry to here you'll have to discontinue your work. I love this. Your other work is wonderful, also. I'm glad you put this up, even if it's not finished. I love your works, and hope you still continue to write even if you don't put it up on NG.
To some of the ones before me: Just becasue it does not have animations and such does not make it unsuitable for this site. Do you have no imagination? Or are you just to lazy to think for yourself? And do you know how many Tehkar fans would be extremely pissed if she didn't put it up? And yes you will hit dead ends because it's "unfinished" :)
It's a damn shame, TehKar.
I absolutely loved the rest of your work, and have been anticipating Ep3 of Seduction for a long time. It's just too bad that it'll never see a finished version. I loved what you did put together, though, and hope you make your return some day.
To all those would-be Newgrounders before me: Newgrounds is a place for Flash. That is, flash of all kinds. Animations, games, and even simple things like this (you have to admit, for being as little there as it is, it looks decent). Quit telling people what does and doesn't belong on Newgrounds. If it's a Flash file, it belongs here -- provided it can make it without being blammed.
Great stuff, TehKar. It's a shame to see you go.
I liked it alot
It needs some sound though lol. It is probably hard to find a good beat that wouldnt be repetitive for this. But since you didnt do that you shouldve put in animations. Anyways ima boost your score because i really liked it
I had intended to add some vague silhouette imagery, but focus more on the text in this edition. That won't be happening though :{
All these kind reviews make Teh Kar sad to leave Sukanu-kun.
~Teh Kar Loves You All
Intriguing
Quite excellent.
I'm surprised at how quickly I got into the story.
I guess I'm just pining for the fjords... er.. Zork.
However, I found a bug (on my first try too).
<MINOR SPOILER WARNING>
I got an "undefined" response to an action.
It is reproducible with this path (sans "Continue" actions ):
* Avoid her.
* Ignore her.
* Greet her.
* Who do you think I am?
* Look at the statue
* Remove the sheet
* Not interested
* Go look out the window
* Kneel down and look more closely
Gome ne :{ it is really unfinished Taini-san.
I never played Zork, but I know it was a very popular text adventure, so I'm flattered by the comparison *blushiness*
~Teh Kar Loves You