Nice. :)
I have to say, the plot in this animation was very well thought out. Though there wasn't much animation in here, it had a whole comic book sort of feel to it, so it doesn't really matter.
Some voice acting would've been nice. Unless you didn't want it that way, then the text is fine. :)
It kind of works that way, so...
Excellent work.
5/5
Review Request Club
Good but Could have been better
This flash was a really good one very creative but it needed more action. I can understand this one because it was a combat simulator but for future reference try to throw in some more combat. Also give the characters voices because voices show emmotions that sometimes you cannot show with flash.
Other then that it had very nice graphics and the pictures where good. The sound went well with the flash just needed some voices so thats what I think you should go for in part 2 if you dont have voices already try adding them and if you can't then you can't no harm done because this was still a really good flash.
Awesome.
There was nothing wrong with the graphics. They were used well and it all ran smoothly. The only problem was, their was very little happened other than moving around. Of course the occaisional explosion was all the more appreciated due to this. I don't think there are many flashes which use pictures instead of drawn things though, and manage to make almost the entire flash in that way.
A really great idea as well. Can't say I've heard of Robotech before, but you've done a really good job with it.
The sound effects were nice. I also think that instead of using voices, text was a good idea. And the subtitles stayed on long enough to read and didn't linger overlong. Sometimes the sound of the flying thing became a little annoying since it was so high pitched. The music tracks were also very nice.
While there wasn't exactly a lot violence, you managed to make the few moments stand out so they seemed much bigger. Well done.
Hope to see more of these episodes from you, they're quite special. Maybe you'll even get a collection one day.
not bad
-GOOD-
well the storyline was pretty good in this, you took the characters and made a whole mission by yourself, pretty cool. some of the soundFX werent half bad also.
-BAD-
well the animation was kinda corny, when you had to make an animated thing, you just draw one picture happining, that went nothing like the graphics. voice actors would also be nice.
-OVERALL-
pretty good flash
I can see you're a big robotech fan...
~The Pros~
This was a pretty good flash for your first one. The animation was pretty decent, and I liked the different motiongs that they did. They looked really well done. Also, most of the backgrounds were really well done, and it really resemled a futuristic setting. The different sound effects were done really well, and it made this flash really stand out among other mediocre flashes that get saved.
~The Cons~
Well, for some reason, it looked as if you didn't actually animate the flash itself, but instead copy, paste, and crop it from somewhere else, but I'm probably wrong, Also, there wasn't any voice acting in the flash, and that could have given it a higher score.
Overall, a really great flash for your first one, I was impressed. I want to see the next episode! ~Review Request Club~
5 out of 5
Wow! thanks. I knew from the start that the Photoshop method would appear rather stiff, but I cleverly tried to disguise it with lots of weird camera and background motion. I suppose such is the way of anime. I really wanted to put voice acting too, but the file already reached 4.5 megabytes, and of course, the limit was only 5. I'm currently developing the sequel and I am trying to improve on a lot of things. Thanks for you time!!