Nope.
This is all sorts of wrong. ALL SORTS! First off, Link should never be portrayed as scraggly thin. That's just, crap. Next, his voice is all wrong. I understand that Link's voice is whatever the player perceives it to be, and for you that may be what Link sounds like, but I think you could've found a better fit than someone with such a deep voice.
Next on my crap list is how short it is. I'm waitig for this great confrontation with Mido, the anticipation is all built up, and then you end it right before the best part. You've pretty much ruined what could have been a solid entry just by cutting it too short.