Not bad, but at the same time, not good.
I see you tried to keep the movment of the lower body out of the picture, and some of the voices were pretty bad, the blonde guy for example. And if the red guy didnt have a mouth, then he had no vocal cords, how could he talk? Even if it was in his thought he doesn't know how to form the vibrations with his vocal cords. Nice effort
He speaks through telepathy.
I had to make some sound recordings though so you wouldnt be in the dark.
Cool
really good cant wait for file 2
a jaw, for what!?
now, I was looking at your gi-go character models and i was like "WTF, why do they have a jaw, but no mouth...." that's the only thing i don't understand, why have a jaw if you can't use it. yea, I know, aliens and humans fused, but really, on that evolution timel;ine you had(lol) you could have had the current gi-go, and the on w/out a jaw. cuz, eventually, over time there bodys will realize that will have no use for a jaw at all...
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DrRobot
How do you know it isnt just a pointy bone? I never showed his "jaw" sctually moving which would mean it isnt actually a jaw.
That evolution chart didnt have anything to do with the movie, it was just the previous Gi-go models I made over the years for my movies.
liked it
That wasn't to bad. I liked it alot more than i thought i would. Keep up the good work.
Very good, keep it up.
Well, I clicked on file two, completely intent on viewing, rating, and reviewing it, untill I noticed that you said we should watch file 1 so we know whats going on. And guess what? I enjoyed the movie. I knocked on about half a point for that :) Anyway, enough with intros, lets get on to buisiness.
Graphics: Excellent! By far, these are some of the best character models I have ever seen. You depictions of decapitated men, along with your character model for Gi-go, were very good. I also enjoyed the backrounds, which were top notch! I could tell you must have spent quite a time drawing this stuff. I can't draw for beans, which is why I haven't submitted things... lol... anyway, for your great talent at drawing, I gave you a nine.
Style: Well, whaddayaknow. Good graphics, and a good animation style! Will the wonders never cease? Lol. Anyway, nice work with the animation. Some of it was kindof broken up (like your lip synching), but I think that's 'cause my computer's a piece of shit. Anyway, I liked a lot of your animation, and definately liked the smoothness of the flash overall. I liked how you made it smooth, especially for a violent flash. I appreciate your talent, and the fact that your flash didn't have the sharpness that makes my eyes bleed...
Sound: Alright, nice voice acting! Did you do all of that yourself? Because if you did, then it was some pretty good stuff! Your abiility to switch up your voice so that none of the characters sound anything like each other is uncanny, and sort of scary. However, I liked your enthusiasm, and think that overall, you did a very good job with special effects. I especially liked the gun shots, and the sound of the hellicopter.
Violence: Hmm... I usually don't like violence. I think that in today's world, there's too much of it. But since that's what this flash is mainly about, I gave it a 7. There wasn't too much, but there was a decent ammount of violence going on in there.
Overall, this was excellent, and goes great with my qoute: "Intollerance is the root of all evil" (the part where the commander says that gi-go will never fit in in the real world.)
I'm glad you like my character models, I spent a month planning them all out before I even started making this.
Some of the lip syncing stuff badly on my computer too, I think its cause I had a scripted clock in the background. I like things smooth =)
I did all the voices except the general. I'm really picky about sound effects. I spend way too much time finding them.
I only use the violence where I saw it nessisary, I dont want it to be the main theme of these movies though.
Thank you so much for all the kind words and constructive critisism! And thanks for taking the time to write a great review!
-Seth