Decent, decent...
You look like you've got a pretty solid story for a flash. Animation was ok, drawings were good, but much of it seemed too static. In the first part, for example, the people talking are in the exact same position and it took me a minute or two to distinguish who was who and who was talking.
Fight scene was decent.
A major problem was the (lack of) backgrounds. Most of it was just gray.
Other than that, you've got a good idea, good art style (just use it more!) and good voice actors (Dodge and Post rock)... this could turn into something good.