Needs more work
Your freeze frame drawings are good...but your actionscript, i'm sorry, are CRAP. Moving limbs around w/ no "fluidness" during fight scenes are easy to do, but if you want something that looks real and connecting, try again. And put more emotions into your voices, the speech system on my computer has more emotion than that. Your story idea is decent (not very original but decent), but your dialogs are shit...something a young teenager would write.
Need better sound
The animation is quite well done, so that is okay. Focus more on the sound. Ask someone else to do the voices and increase the soundquality of the spoken lines. The music is allright in the battle scene, but maybe try some background music in the first scene already, something soft.
Also, animate the mouths with more then 2 frames. It is a lot of work, but it pays off.
No wow factor to it.
Kinda of a cliche story. There was nothing that made me go. "wow i wanna watch that again." While the characters were fairly well drawn, I must say that there was an absence of any kind of background. The voices of the vampires didn't fit them to well either. To human, to normal, to bland.
Good yet bad...?
Okay, I'm going to go straight to the bad stuff:
1) You need to work on the lip synching. It was just strange reading the words and then seeing the lips not match. Either that, or the sound was lagging; one of the two.
2) Although you have great drawings in certain parts, others are mediocre. Improve your attention to detail, and by gods, you would be one of the best Flash artists -ever-.
3) Please watch the grammar in your writing. It's good, but some parts are off (ie. Requiem Draculas sword => Requiem, Dracula's sword).
4) Some parts are just too plain during the dialogue.. some music would help greatly.
Anyways, aside from those 4 main points, this is an absolutely stunning Flash. I love most of the graphics; some were just 'how the fuck did you do that' commentable.
no questions best flash ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
only one flaw the begining voices were kinda weird it made the movie look bad at first but then wow awesome movie