Improvment
Well theres not much to say for this submission. Defintly room for improvement. The style was okay, you can tell it was suppoe to look like that unlike some submissions who look like crap because they are. Definitly could be better and I hope to see more of this work
Wasn't that I Nike commercial or something?
It's pretty cool, although it really isn't your own work.. looks like you just taped a commercial and used the trace bitmap tool on the whole thing.
BORING!!!
The whole "tracing bitmap" thing was cool for booty dance, but it seems like that's all yer doing, it's incredibly good for your age, but try putting your flash talent to good use and make a cartoon where you do the drawings, that would be cool.
ive seen this on the internet before
it was on a heightmax add.
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cool liked the style, does need some color, also would be alot better with some music, and maybe replace carter with SHAQ heheh or or the cobe man hehe anyways good flash...